Real Life in Star Trek, The Counter-Clock Incident, pt 2
Disclaimer
This is a discussion of a non-âFree as in Freedomâ popular culture franchise property with references to a part of that franchise behind a paywall. My discussion and conclusions are free, but nothing about the discussion or conclusions implies any attack on the ownership of the properties. All the big names are trademarks of the owners and so forth and everything here should be well within the bounds of Fair Use.
PreviouslyâŚ
The project was outlined in this post, for those falling into this from somewhere else. In short, this is an attempt to use the details presented in Star Trek to assemble a view of what life looks like in the Federation.
This is neither recap nor review; those have both been done to death over fifty-plus years. It is a catalog of information we learn from each episode, though, so expect everything to be a potential âspoiler,â if thatâs an irrational fear you have.
Rather than list every post in the series here, you can easily find them all on the startrek tag page.
Worlds Apart, Part 1
As mentioned last week, this story and next weekâs were originally pitched as a two-part episode for Star Trekâs third or never-produced fourth season. For this reason, the Aprils are basically forgotten, instead of finding a reason to continue referencing The Counter-Clock Incident, as weâve seen with the other original stories branching out from their âhostâ episodes.
In any case, while the story carries no name apart from being under the literal cover of The Counter-Clock Incident, given the plot, it seemed only right to name it Worlds Apart.
Foster Adaptation
We find this story as the second third of Star Trek Log Seven.
âSorry to have to run, Ambassador Werthel, Admiral Mâarrt, Dame Mâarrt,â he explained hastily to the little group. âDuty runs on its own timetable.â
While weâve seen them so far as a diverse group of humans, this might be the first time that weâve seen any evidence that Starfleetâs upper echelons include non-humans. Speaking of diverse humans, Iâm not going to quote the introduction of Admiral Sen, packed full of Yellow Peril tropes.
âYou see, Mr. Spock, the rumors were correct. The Delminnens have taken up residence in the Theta Draconis system. They have also seemingly taken to making small planetoids out of big planets.â
Theta Draconis (θ Dra) sits around seventy light years from Earth, and appears to be a binary star system.
âYou will proceed immediately to the system in question and establish contact with the Delminnens. You will invite Van Delminnen to return to Terra, where he is to be granted a permanent appointment to Starfleet Research at a generous annual stipend.â
âSuppose,â Kirk ventured,â âDelminnen declines our invitation? He has no reason to hold any love for Federation institutions.â
Both parts of this exchange strike me as notable. First, Starfleet apparently has no significant moral concerns with hiring people who destroy planetsâŚthough weâll find out that this isnât an accurate portrayal of events. But then, Kirk points outâfor the first time in a while, actuallyâthat many Federation citizens oppose the Federation. Maybe itâs because of their hiring practices?
âHello, Kumara. It is you.â
Because these posts follow the airing order of episodes, rather than the order of adaptations, we met Kumara in the follow up to The Slaver Weapon that I referred to as The Thorny Point of Bare Distress, where he was a known quantity to the crew. By contrast, this story is Kumaraâs first appearance.
Less useful but maybe amusing to some, in searching to see if the character was meant as a reference to somethingâother than the plant, I meanâI stumbled on a website suggesting that a live-action Kumara should have been gender-swapped and played by the late Elizabeth Montgomery, which sounds like a fairly solid choice, to me, and is now how I see the Klingon.
Incidentally, I wonât quote much if any of the relevant passages, since weâre not here to piece together Klingon culture. However, I will say that, if youâre interested in Fosterâs vision of what a Klingon-centric Star Trek franchise might have looked like, or just want more insight into Kumara, there are lengthy and reasonably interesting passages in this book set entirely on the Klingon ship Klathas.
âAll right,â Kirk broke in, turning to face the doctor. âYes, Kumara and I know each other on an informal basis. Did you ever hear of the FEA, Bones?â
McCoy considered. âNoâŚno, wait a second. The Friendship Exchange Action, wasnât it?â
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âSureâit was well documented in all the psychology journals. Was set up during one of those brief friendly periods between the Federation and the Klingon Empire. Some bright medical theorist thought it might promote understanding between peoples if academy cadets from both cultures spent some time in close contact with one another. The program was limited to command candidates, if I remember right.â
Hereâs the (fairly obvious, I guess) background in that Academy program that Kirk mentioned the last time we saw Kumara.
A sudden surge rocked them as the lift opened onto the bridge. Kirk moved immediately to his command position while Spock took his place at the science station. McCoy hovered nearby, feeling helpless as usual, despite the benefits his presence always brought to a tense bridge.
I donât think that Iâve brought this up, before, but since weâre in the home stretch, apart from McCoyâs insecurity, I want to point out that Foster occasionally throws in these weird comments about how inherently useful McCoy is. He never supplies evidence or examples, either in countering the insecurity or in the surrounding text. We should just take it for granted that his loitering on the bridge is important to the shipâs efficiency.
âA moment, Captain.â Spock bent over the library computer and reported quickly. âAccording to what information we have, there is a naval base of considerable size on Shahkur Nine.â
While itâs possible that the name is just fabricated, âShakurâ is an Arabic name meaning âdeeply grateful,â derived from one of the Islamic names of God. And while itâs entirely legitimate to believe that someone named the star for TupacâI mean, even I know who Tupac wasâthereâs also Shakhura, a village in Bahrain with burial mounds that are likely to become a UNESCO World Heritage Site.
âLieutenant, there is a game humans play, a game Vulcans play. It is called chess. Ever hear of it?â
Given how anti-human the Vulcans we have met seem to be, itâs probably notable that chess has almost become considered a Vulcan game.
âEngineering, Scott here. Are we goinâ to make a run at them finally, Captain?â
Scott is now complaining to his boss that potentially starting a war with the Klingons is taking too long for his tastes.
Char Delminnen turned her eyes to the deck and sighed. âEver since our parents died and we were farmed out to foster parents, Van and I have never been separated for very long. We see things too much the same, too well, to look elsewhere for companionship.â Her eyes turned up to him, and they were haunted.
Itâs not much, but this line does give a bit more insight into the foster care system, which came up in How Sharper Than a Serpentâs Tooth.
âThatâs the only reason youâre interested in us, isnât it? Youâre no better than the Klingons.â
Kirk bridled. âI think that we, and the Federationâyour Federation, Ms. Delminnen, whether you like it or notâare entitled to better than that. As for personal concern, comparing us with the Klingons is akin toââ
âYes, that is the reason,â Spock interrupted. Kirk threw his first officer a look of reproach.
It came up before, but this gets deeper into the way that the Federation government is viewed by civilians. Notably, Spock plays into it, but the next paragraph exposes it as a bit of a ruse.
âThe deviceâŚitâs not a weapon.â
This has nothing to do with our project, but I figured that Iâd throw this in for context as we go, andâsince itâs likely most readers here arenât going to over a hundred pages to get the original storyâidentify this cliffhanger as the point where the two-part episode divides.
Conclusions
We donât get much, here, and what we get is suspect, since it didnât appear on screen. Still, Foster does provide us with some new insights.
The Good
We finally get some evidence that Starfleet has diverse leadership, beyond diverse groups of humans.
The Bad
While the actual interaction turns out to be apocryphal, Kirk doesnât even consider questioning why the Federation might try to hire a scientist in possession of a device capable of tearing planets apart.
Similarly, we see a return of the idea that many Federation citizens oppose the Federation, or at least are dismissive of it.
Scott continues to be thoroughly belligerent towards aliens, and regarding aliens that itâs politically acceptable to dislikeâsuch as the Klingonsâhe openly questions superiors about whatâs taking so long to start a war.
We get some small insight into the foster care system, with terms like âfarming outâ suggesting that it has either not improved or gotten worse since today.
The Weird
When Kirk was a young adultâroughly fifteen to twenty years ago, depending on how long after the original series these episodes are meant to take placeâStarfleet and the Klingon navy ran an extensive exchange program, meant to promote understanding. Based on the lack of discussion on that point, it seems likely that nobody bothered to measure the effects that the program had.
Chess appears to be one of the few cultural artifacts to spread faster than humans, and is so successful that itâs often associated as much with Vulcans as it is with humans.
Next
Next up, we wrap up Fosterâs take on the franchise in Worlds Apart, Part 2.
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