Real Life in Star Trek, The Wounded
Disclaimer
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PreviouslyâŠ
I initially outlined the project in this post, for those falling into this from somewhere else. In short, we attempt to use the details presented in Star Trek to assemble a view of what life looks like in the Federation. This âphaseâ of the project changes from previous posts, however. The Next Generation takes place long after the original series, so we shouldnât expect similar politics and socialization. Maybe more importantly, I enjoy the series less.
Put simply, you shouldnât read this expecting a recap or review of an episode. Many people have done both to death over nearly sixty years. You will find a catalog of information that we learn from each episode, though, so expect everything to be a potential âspoiler,â if you happen to have that irrational fear.
Rather than list every post in the series here, you can quickly find them all on the startrek tag page.
The Wounded
This episode feels like an outlier for the season, in how much it quietly talks about the culture, so we actually have some work to do.
Captainâs log, stardate 44429.6. We are on a mapping survey near the Cardassian sector. It has been nearly a year since a peace treaty ended the long conflict between the Federation and Cardassia.
Wait. Did they fight a war for the first seasons of this series and never mention it?
TROI: Running, Captain? You? Thatâs hard to believe.
I suppose that a bit of brown-nosing never caused any irrevocable harmâŠ
PICARD: Believe it. Iâd been sent to make preliminary overtures to a truce. Iâd lowered my shields as a gesture of good will. But the Cardassians were not impressed. They had taken out most of my weapons and damaged the impulse engines before I could regroup and run.
Once again, youâll notice that they portray Picard as someone always willing to fight aliens, unless they have more power than him. Then he runs.
KEIKO: Kelp buds, plankton loaf and sea berries.
OâBRIEN: Sweetheart, Iâm not a fish.
In case you thought that complaining about food ended with non-humanoid aliens, OâBrien would like you to know that mainstream Federation culture also finds variations of Japanese food bizarre and repulsive, too.
KEIKO: Itâs very healthy. I had this every morning when I was growing up.
This raises an interesting point, which weâve (vaguely) touched on before, that humans seem extremely segregated based on ethnicity. Picard comes from France and, other than a complete disinterest in the French language, forms most of his identity around that. OâBrien will remind you at all times that he grew up Irish. Keiko grew up Japanese.
Interestingly, in our world, at least where I lived, this episode would have come at a time when such cultural segregation had started to fall apart. By the 1990s, it wouldnât feel surprising to find someone with some preference in Mexican, Indian, or Japanese restaurants, despite not having ethnic roots in those countries. Today, you mightâand maybe shouldâhave a favorite pupusa recipe, ferment your own kelp, or have multiple favorite Indian recipes and restaurants depending on the region of the country.
KEIKO: She cooked?
OâBRIEN: She didnât believe in a replicator. She thought real food was more nutritious.
Apparently, people have had replicators in the home for at least a few decades, given OâBrienâs presumed age. And some people thinkâor thoughtâthat the food didnât have as much value as food prepared by hand.
KEIKO: She handled real meat? She touched it and cut it?
This touches on a comment that I pointed out, back in Lonely Among Us, that the Federation seems to cultivate an almost childish outlook on food, where consumption has no visible consequences. Keiko finds touching meat disgusting. And honestly, if you viscerally feel ethical problems about coming into contact with a food, then maybe you shouldnât eat it if someone hides that preparation from you?
PICARD: Letâs see if theyâll answer our hail now, Mister Worf.
Once again, we have Picard trot out his ânow that I have displayed my power, we can take peaceful actions for a few minutes as I act smug about itâ move.
MACET: I am Gul Macet of the Cardassian ship Trager.
You might recognize Macet as Marc Alaimo, who previously appeared as the Romulan Tabok in The Neutral Zone, and will go on to show up somewhat regularly as a different Cardassian Gul on Deep Space Nine.
HADEN: Captain, weâve confirmed your report. It was the starship Phoenix, under the command of Benjamin Maxwell.
The captain of a Federation starship taking international law into his own hands to risk a devastating war? That soundsâŠactually no, that sounds fairly consistent with everything weâve seen. Kirk seemed like an outlier in the original series with his care about not making everything worse, and Picard goes rogue fairly regularly, most recentlyâŠliterally only last week in Dataâs Day.
HADEN: Theyâve granted you safe passage. Weâve agreed that youâll take along a delegation of observers as a show of good faith. Jean-Luc, I donât have to tell you the Federation is not prepared for a new sustained conflict. You must preserve the peace, no matter what the cost. Haden out.
You might notice the ominous tone, here, where Haden seems to imply that he only cares about peace, because their analysis says that theyâll lose to the Cardassians.
RIKER: I tend to agree with Mister Worf, Captain. I think we should limit their access while theyâre on board. They donât need to have the run of the ship.
Peace, no matter the cost, except for treating the non-human allies like actual people with shared goals, I guess Starfleet meant.
PICARD: Counselor, I want you to stay as close to the crew as possible. Some of them may feel uncomfortable with Cardassians on board. I donât want any incidents.
Did Picard admit that his crew has something of a racism problem?
MACET: Captain Picard, you can understand that we are skeptical. Do you expect us to believe that you are using every means at your disposal to track down one of your own?
Ah, that wonderful Federation reputation for fair and honest dealing. Have we met anybodyânot employed by the Federation, I mean, or who needs their helpâwho has expressed any confidence in them? As Picard will point out, he has them on the bridge to involve them in real time, and they still assume that the crew will conspire to trick them.
OâBRIEN: More like sabotage, sir. It was on Setlik Three. A squad of Cardassian militia made a sneak raid on an outpost, wiped out close to a hundred civilians.
Long-time fans of the franchise will already know this, but this raid on Setlik III will quickly become the core of OâBrienâs character, producing some ugly racism and bad post-traumatic stress thatâŠI donât think that the writers ever bother to actually have him deal with.
OâBRIEN: If my Commander tells me to discuss the Transporter with you, I will. If Captain Picard orders me to tell you everything I know about Ben Maxwell, I will. But who I choose to spend my free time with, thatâs my business.
Speaking of the characterâs racismâŠ
MACET: Then you will not give us the means to find his precise location?
PICARD: No. I wonât.
And Picard has managed to live down to the Federationâs reputation, making it clear that he does value the Phoenix more than Cardassian civilians.
OâBRIEN: đ¶ The minstrel boy to the war has gone⊠đ¶
We get a surprising amount of Thomas Mooreâs The Minstrel Boy. Maybe interestingly, if it sounds familiar to you todayâas opposed to 1991, when this airedâyou might recognize it from Eleanor McEvoyâs 2017 recording of it.
MACET: You can read our transponder codes.
This feels like something that would have or at least should have come up during treaty negotiations and spread through the fleet, not something that Macet should have only now found out about. Did the Cardassian government choose to hide the Federationâs technology, or did the Federation fail to disclose how well it can track Cardassian ships?
MACET: The warship carried a crew of six hundred, the supply ship, fifty.
In case you wanted to know the cost of Picard dragging his feet and prioritizing Maxwell and the Phoenix over its targets, here you have it. Remember, Macet planned to send multiple ships after the rogue ship at the start, but Picard waited until he had no other choice and only gave the necessary information to one Cardassian ship, in an episode that started out showing us that individual Starfleet ships can overpower individual Cardassian ships.
OâBRIEN: Heâs a rare one, all right. I count myself lucky, sir. Iâve served with the two finest Captains in Starfleet.
First Troi, and now OâBrien. I wonder if someone pays them extra, every time they stroke Picardâs ego. I mean, letâs not forget that he enabled the murder of hundreds of people minutes ago.
OâBRIEN: He would never retaliate out of vengeance, no matter what that Cardassian says. Theyâre up to something, sir. Theyâre the ones you should be investigating, not Captain Maxwell.
You see, the Cardassians have a plan, therefore the mass murder of them makes perfect sense, and so we shouldnât worry about itâŠ
OâBRIEN: I like them fine. Itâs just, well, I know them. You learn to watch your back when youâre around those people.
Has anyone ever used the phrase âthose peopleâ for reasons other than bigotryâŠ?
OâBRIEN: I wanted to say I owe you an apology. I shouldnât have popped off like that in the turbolift.
âŠWow.
I needed to scan ahead to make sure that this scene didnât abruptly turn into a brawl, and no, OâBrien really did sincerely apologize for doing something wrong and hurting someoneâs feelings, something that we havenât really seen since Kirk in the original series. And he does a good job of it, too.
Mind you, that opens up a bunch of questions about why this maturity doesnât seem to stick to the character, but weâll deal with that as these posts continue.
DARO: That was a terrible mistake. We were told the outpost was a launching place for a massive attack against us.
I complain about the writing on this show a lot, so I want to make a point of how much structure this episode at least tries to have. OâBrien has problems with his wifeâs food and the Cardassians; the Setlik III raid happened on erroneous information, andâŠwell, weâll get to that.
TELLE: A lie, Gul Macet. I was studying the terminal interface systems. Theyâre more efficient than ours. I have no idea what was in the files.
Gosh, how lousy do Cardassian computers need to look, if they gaze longingly at the nonsensical, often-racist user interfaces deployed on computers in the Federation?
PICARD: If there is to be a lasting peace, Gul Macet, neither you nor I must allow any one man to undermine our efforts.
For the record, Picard pointedly compared looking at an unlocked computer screen with mass murder of civilians. Those sound like the same threat to a lasting peace, to him.
MAXWELL: Picard, I have to tell you I was grateful when I realized it was you Starfleet sent after me. Somebody who knows what itâs really like out here.
Two things strike me about this line.
First, the man directly responsible for hundreds or thousands of deaths, and has risked starting a significant war that Starfleet believes that it would lose, sees a kindred spirit in Picard. I canât help reading into this, that he assumes that Picard will let him go, as a fellow captain prone to going rogue.
Second, despite his grand speech about involving the Cardassians in every step of this process, Picard has failed to invite Macet to this party, confirming the Gulâs concerns that Starfleet might want to cover this up.
Also, to summarize, Maxwell has killed all these people, because he objects to the Cardassian military still having weapons near the Federation border. Even if he has his facts straight, they surely have a right to patrol their borders, exactly as the Federation does.
MAXWELL: Then listen to this. The Cardassians are arming again. That so-called science station? Military supply port.
Here we go. Compare this to Daroâs comment about Setlik III happening because of false intelligence.
And by the way, while I didnât hear anything worth citing, the deleted scenes for this episode make it fairly clear that the writers intended these parallel structures in the episode. Keiko pushes her husband harder on his reaction to trauma. Picard warns Maxwell when he gives the tracking code to the Cardassian ship, showing that he has chosen to side with the aggressor. Maxwell admits that his claims have no evidence backing them up. None of them introduces information that we couldnât (or didnât) infer from the dialogue left in the episode, but acknowledging them in deleted scenes makes those inferences part of the text.
MAXWELL: And wait six months while the bureaucrats sit around reading reports, trying to figure out what to do? They donât know whatâs going on out here. But you should, Picard. You know what itâs like to be under fire.
While the Federation continues to have a terrible reputation outside its borders, Starfleet has a terrible reputation inside, presumed to ignore imminent threats.
Granted, Maxwell hasnât found an actual threat, imminent or otherwise, but he doesnât seem to understand thatâŠ
PICARD: Continue the hail, Mister Worf. Priority one message. Do you know what that ship might be?
Didnât he have the ability to determine the ship type a little while agoâŠ?
DATA: Captain, the Phoenix has accelerated to warp nine. We will not be able to reach him before he intercepts the Cardassian ship.
PICARD: Ensign, warp nine.
Or, if Picard wants to catch the Phoenix, maybe he could try going faster than them? Normally, I wouldnât mention something like this, but weâve already had at least one incident where Picard took his sweet time in catching up to this shipânot to mention warning Maxwell about his impending capture by the Cardassians, in the deleted sceneâand that choice resulted in six hundred fifty lives lost.
Captainâs log, supplemental. Captain Maxwell has turned his ship over to his First Officer and transported aboard the Enterprise. I have confined him to quarters for the return voyage.
Wait, should we expect that, of the entire crew, only Maxwell had this murderous impulse, and arresting him fixes the Phoenix?
PICARD: One more thing, Macet. Maxwell was right. Those ships were not carrying scientific equipment, were they? A research station within armâs reach of three Federation sectors? Cargo ships running with high energy subspace fields that jam sensors?
I believe that we have reached peak-Picard, here, where he wants everyone to know that, despite taking actions to ensure peace, he actually believes Maxwellâs conspiracy theory, and would honestly rather have gone to war over it. All we need to complete it is a threat to start that war on a flimsy pretextâŠ
PICARD: Take this message to your leaders, Gul Macet. Weâll be watching.
Thank you, Jean-Luc. I knew that we had something missingâŠ
Conclusions
As mentioned, this episode, particularly if you include the deleted scenes, makes many ambiguous issues overt problems.
The Good
While Iâll talk a lot about the racism in this episode, OâBrien tries hard to overcome and atone for his problems, openly apologizing.
The Bad
Multiple members of the crew go out of their way to make Picard feel powerful and courageous for mostly only showing up. And Picard, for his part, continues to make it clear that he loves having power over aliens, but immediately backs down if he doesnât think that he can win. He even ends the episode threatening to restart a war over flimsy information and his ego.
In addition to Picard, we see a shocking amount of overt racism from the crew. Some of them try to play it off as lingering emotion from a brutal war (that theyâve never mentioned), with Picard even assigning Troi to monitor for any problems. They even try to justify the mass murder of civilians as a preemptive strike of unknown motivation, which they try to equate to possibly reading unattended classified information. But OâBrien in particular makes it clear that he struggles to overcome his racism, both in the general sense of dealing with groups like the Cardassians and in the personal sense of respecting his wifeâs traditions. We also get the impression that most humans grow up in ethnic enclaves, segregated from other groups.
Some people donât see or havenât seen replicated food as equal to meals prepared by a person, suggesting a widespread (if minority) distrust in the technology. Others find the manual preparation of food, particularly meat, a disgusting and even barbaric practice, suggesting a wide disconnect between eaters and the sources of their foods.
The Federation apparently only has problems with its officers going rogue and committing acts of war against rival powers if their analysis says that they canât win the resulting war. They even have a reputation for sanctioning such operations, then delaying their enforcement of treatiesâŠa reputation which Picard largely earns by bungling the rescue of civilians in an attempt to protect the attacker and not allowing the Cardassians to hear the attackerâs version of events as promised. And that attacker believes that Picard will sympathize with him, based on his actions on the Stargazer and Enterprise.
Starfleet at least appears ready to let the entire crew of the Phoenix off the hook for its participation in attacks on civilian populations resulting in hundreds of deaths, because its captain has surrendered to the authorities.
The Weird
Apparently, the Federation can fight a devastating long-term war without anybody on the alleged most important ship in the fleet ever getting involved or anybody mentioning it.
Next
In seven days, the ultimate evil drops by for contract negotiations, in Devilâs Due.
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